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篇1

例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.

翻譯：可想而知，知識(shí)在我們的一生中扮演一個(gè)重要的角色。

2、So + 形容詞+ be + 主詞+ that + 句子（如此……以至于……）

例句：So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.

翻譯：時(shí)間是如此珍貴，我們經(jīng)不起浪費(fèi)它。

3、Spare no effort to + V （不遺余力的）

篇2

1. 目前許多人扔垃圾時(shí)不分類

2. 由此帶來的問題

3. 提倡垃圾分類的意義

Waste Sorting

Most people haven’t formed the habit of and committed themselves to waste sorting now in China. They would throw their domestic garbage — kitchen refuse, abandoned plastics and papers，broken china and glass, etc. — all into the same public containers, without"thinking whether they are recyclable or not.

篇3

關(guān)鍵詞： 獨(dú)立學(xué)院 四、六級(jí)作文 錯(cuò)誤和問題分析

大學(xué)英語寫作是衡量學(xué)生英語綜合水平和應(yīng)用能力的一個(gè)重要的考查指標(biāo)，也是大學(xué)英語四、六級(jí)考試的一個(gè)重要內(nèi)容。教育部高等教育司發(fā)行的大學(xué)英語課程教學(xué)要求就書面表達(dá)（一般要求）明確要求學(xué)生“能完成一般性的寫作任務(wù)，能描述個(gè)人經(jīng)歷、觀感、情感和發(fā)生的事件等，能寫常見的應(yīng)用文，能就一般性話題或提綱在半小時(shí)內(nèi)寫出120詞的短文，內(nèi)容基本完整，用詞恰當(dāng)，語意連貫，能掌握基本的寫作技巧”。由于大綱明確地規(guī)定了時(shí)間和篇幅，這就要求學(xué)生能緊扣所給的題目主題，寫出言簡意賅、邏輯性強(qiáng)、語言規(guī)范的文章。然而大部分學(xué)生在四、六級(jí)考場感到非常棘手，加上情緒緊張，往往造成思路不清晰，字跡潦草，亂涂亂改，以致失分嚴(yán)重。大學(xué)英語四、六級(jí)改革后的新題型，寫作占了總分710分的15％，也就是說寫作的滿分是106.5分。筆者曾分析長江大學(xué)文理學(xué)院的06級(jí)大學(xué)英語考生四級(jí)考試的總分?jǐn)?shù)和寫作分?jǐn)?shù)之間的關(guān)系，發(fā)現(xiàn)基本上寫作分?jǐn)?shù)在80分左右的學(xué)生，總分大部分在425分以上，也就通過了四級(jí)考試，而大部分沒有通過考試的學(xué)生寫作分?jǐn)?shù)偏低。因此，寫好作文對(duì)于參加大學(xué)英語四、六級(jí)考試的學(xué)生來說至關(guān)重要，不容忽視。

筆者結(jié)合教學(xué)過程中對(duì)學(xué)生習(xí)作的批改經(jīng)驗(yàn)，總結(jié)出影響學(xué)生作文成績的幾個(gè)原因。以學(xué)生2008年3月份的習(xí)作題目“Holding Olympic Games：a Business Activity or a Sports Ceremony?”為例，提綱如下：有的人認(rèn)為召開奧林匹克運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)已經(jīng)成為了一種商業(yè)行為，而不再是單純的體育盛會(huì)；有的人認(rèn)為奧林匹克運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)仍然是全世界的體育盛會(huì)，奧林匹克精神得到了傳承與弘揚(yáng)，闡述你的觀點(diǎn)和看法。筆者具體分析了學(xué)生在寫作方面的薄弱環(huán)節(jié)，具體如下：

通過對(duì)學(xué)生上交的習(xí)作進(jìn)行詳細(xì)分析，總結(jié)出學(xué)生在寫作過程中主要存在如下幾個(gè)薄弱環(huán)節(jié)。

一、沒有四、六級(jí)作文的框架意識(shí)和主題意識(shí)

無視標(biāo)題和提綱，隨心所欲地寫出一段或是多于三段的文章。有的學(xué)生洋洋灑灑地寫出五六段兩三百字的文章，可是很多的語言和段落與主題無關(guān)。譬如有些學(xué)生用大量的篇幅描述奧運(yùn)會(huì)的起源和歷史，有的介紹29屆北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)的口號(hào)“New Beijing，Great Olympics”，以及中國政府承諾舉辦一屆高科技有特色的奧運(yùn)會(huì)和所做的努力，有的還介紹了北京正在為第29屆奧運(yùn)會(huì)做哪些整備工作以及進(jìn)展的狀況等。因此，我們在訓(xùn)練學(xué)生寫作時(shí)，一定要強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)生要抓住主題，選擇最緊扣主題的信息材料和語言，以最合乎邏輯的方式安排層次和結(jié)構(gòu)，讓學(xué)生在正式下筆之前，擬好提綱，整理思路，使自己的文章結(jié)構(gòu)環(huán)環(huán)相扣，層次分明。

二、英語語法基礎(chǔ)薄弱，出現(xiàn)重大的語法錯(cuò)誤

這里所說的重大語法錯(cuò)誤包括時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的混用，主謂不一致，單詞詞性混用，以及用詞不當(dāng)?shù)?。例如?/p>

1.The 29th period Olympic Games will hold in Beijing，China.

2.The Olympic Games has many sport items，such as run，jump，swim and so on.

3.Actually，the Olympic Games is derived from the old Greece.

4.I am afraid that the Olympic spirits will dead.I don’t want this day come true one day.

5.Host a high-level Games is the solemn promise that the Chinese government and people make.

6.The five rings in five colors represent the five continents of the world join in friendship.

以上都是學(xué)生習(xí)作的原句，暴露了學(xué)生的不同的語法缺陷。例句1，3是典型的語態(tài)的混用，hold應(yīng)改為be held；is derived from應(yīng)改為derive from。例句2，4，5混用單詞詞性，沒有考慮句子結(jié)構(gòu)。run，jump swim應(yīng)該改為動(dòng)名詞running，jumping，swimming；形容詞dead應(yīng)該改為動(dòng)詞詞組die out作謂語；host應(yīng)改為hosting，構(gòu)成名詞短語作主語。例2中還出現(xiàn)了時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)的雙重錯(cuò)誤，主謂不一致，以及用詞不當(dāng)，has應(yīng)改為have been set up。例句5還出現(xiàn)了時(shí)態(tài)的錯(cuò)誤，make應(yīng)改為made。例句3還出現(xiàn)了用詞不當(dāng)，old應(yīng)改為ancient。例句6 join in應(yīng)改為joined in，構(gòu)成過去分詞短語作后置定語。

很明顯，這些錯(cuò)誤會(huì)嚴(yán)重影響得分。我們知道大學(xué)英語四六級(jí)作文的評(píng)分原則是總體評(píng)分，就文章總體印象給分。學(xué)生如果犯嚴(yán)重的語言錯(cuò)誤，勢必給評(píng)卷教師很不好的印象，得分就自然而然低。因此在大學(xué)英語教學(xué)中，強(qiáng)調(diào)基礎(chǔ)的語法知識(shí)是必要的。學(xué)生只有掌握基本的語法，才能寫出正確的句子，從而寫出通順的文章。

三、句式簡單缺乏變化，上下文連接不緊湊，表達(dá)方式不地道

在批改學(xué)生的習(xí)作時(shí)，筆者發(fā)現(xiàn)有些學(xué)生的作文句式表達(dá)正確，符合語法規(guī)范，思路也清晰，但整個(gè)文章很枯燥，缺乏生動(dòng)性。造成此種現(xiàn)象的原因在于句式和用詞太過呆板，過于重復(fù)，上下文無銜接過渡詞匯，沒有承上啟下之筆。很多學(xué)生在整篇文章中表達(dá)個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，都是重復(fù)多次以第一/三人稱為主語的單一句式出現(xiàn)，譬如“I/they think...”，“I/they believe...”，“I should should do...”，“I/they must do...”。再比如表示轉(zhuǎn)折意思和因果關(guān)系時(shí)，不少學(xué)生總是不厭其煩地用“but”和“so”。適當(dāng)?shù)木涫阶兓陀迷~生動(dòng)可以使文章潤色。所以，在教學(xué)過程中，可以給學(xué)生歸納一些常用的表達(dá)方式，并且要求學(xué)生強(qiáng)化記憶，以便讓學(xué)生做“有米之炊”。例如：

1.表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)的模式

From my standpoint（viewpoint，point of view），Personally（frankly）speaking，in my opinion，As far as I am concerned，It can be said with certainty that，I am sure that，I am convinced that，It can be easily proved that，It must be admitted that，It is essential（imperative，indispensable，necessary，important）for us to do...，I am firmly opposed to，I think otherwise，I don’t think so，I disagree，I have every reason to say that，It certainly won’t be right to say that，etc.

2.表達(dá)別人的觀點(diǎn)

In the view of other people，Some people tend（incline）to believe that，They point out（argue，claim，insist，assert，declare）that，Other people still hold the view that，etc.

3.表達(dá)普通或共同的觀點(diǎn)

The most widely-held view is，It is generally（universally）thought（believed，considered，acknowledged，recognized，agreed）that，The great majority of the people share the same idea，We are of the same mind，I am of their mind，I can’t agree more，I absolutely（entirely，totally，utterly）agree with them，Generally speaking，etc.

4.因果過渡詞

thus，therefore，hence，accordingly，consequently，in view of，because of，due to，owing to，thanks to，on account of，for this reason，for this purpose，on that account，as a result of，in this（that）case，result in，result from，by the reason that，that is why，etc.

5.意思轉(zhuǎn)折過渡詞

however，while，whereas，nevertheless，anyhow，anyway，otherwise，instead（of），rather than，in any case，at any rate，no matter how（what，when），even so，in spite of，despite，even though，even if，opposite to，on the contrary，etc.

四、沒有四、六級(jí)作文的內(nèi)容意識(shí)和亮點(diǎn)意識(shí)，缺乏新穎性和創(chuàng)造性

相當(dāng)一部分學(xué)生在作文當(dāng)中所表現(xiàn)出對(duì)事物的認(rèn)識(shí)水平和閱歷見解與其年齡和文化程度不相稱，寫出的作文著眼點(diǎn)低、視野狹窄。最主要的問題是，作文中缺乏事例和數(shù)據(jù)，經(jīng)常是大篇幅的說理，內(nèi)容空洞無味。另外，筆者發(fā)現(xiàn)少數(shù)學(xué)生背誦和掌握了不少的作文模板，語言也比較流暢，思路清晰，文章的結(jié)構(gòu)有條有理，可是缺乏自己獨(dú)到的見解，沒有閃光點(diǎn)和亮點(diǎn)。仍然以上述習(xí)作為例，有些學(xué)生在第一二段中分析得有條有理，語言也很流暢?？墒?，在第三段闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，只是輕描淡寫地同意了第一種觀點(diǎn)，認(rèn)為人們把召開奧運(yùn)會(huì)當(dāng)作一種商業(yè)行為，失去了奧林匹克的精神和意義，沒有闡述任何理由，也沒有新穎或說服力強(qiáng)的例證，就草草結(jié)束行文，給人“神龍見首不見尾”之感，不免使文章黯然失色。

以上是筆者多年來通過對(duì)學(xué)生的四、六級(jí)作文進(jìn)行綜合分析總結(jié)出的在四、六級(jí)作文中普遍存在的問題。希望通過對(duì)這些問題的分析，可以幫助學(xué)生提高英語寫作水平，同時(shí)對(duì)大學(xué)英語教學(xué)有一定的指導(dǎo)意義。

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篇4

on new year’s eve, all the people sit around the desk and have a big family dinner. there are some vegetables, some fish, some meat, some fruits and some drink like juice, coke, pepsi and some nice wine. overall, this is a good and delicious dinner. after dinner, we always watch tv new year progammes. we have a wonderful evening on new year’s eve.

on the first day of the spring festival, most of people get up early and say “happy new year” to each other. for breakfast, people often eat dumplings and baozi. after breakfast, people often make many delicious foods, and children often play cards, computer games and fireworks. on the second and third day, we visit friends and relatives.

everyone is busy on chinese new year, and everyone is happy, too.

春節(jié)是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。我們也稱它為春節(jié)。它是在農(nóng)歷1月1日。

在新年前夕,所有人圍坐在桌子上,有一個(gè)大的家庭晚餐。有一些蔬菜,一些魚,一些肉,一些水果和一些喝果汁、可口可樂、百事可樂和一些不錯(cuò)的葡萄酒?？偟膩碚f,這是一個(gè)很好的和美味的晚餐。晚飯后,我們總是看電視節(jié)目。我們有一個(gè)美好的晚上在新年前夕。

篇5

I had a cat six years ago . It was black . So I called him Old Black . It liked catching mice .When it caught the mice, it was so brave ! It also liked eating fish . When it ate something, it always shook its head , how lovely !

Every time when I went home, Old Black alaways came to the door to welcome me . It always lop my feet gently , and it made me very comfortable .

Now Old Black isn’t with me . It was sent to one of my relatives by my parents . I was very sad . But I always miss him . Old Black is my best friend and I like him forever .

篇6

on new year’s eve, all the people sit around the desk and have a big family dinner. there are some vegetables, some fish, some meat, some fruits and some drink like juice, coke, pepsi and some nice wine. overall, this is a good and delicious dinner. after dinner, we always watch tv new year progammes. we have a wonderful evening on new year’s eve.

on the first day of the spring festival, most of people get up early and say “happy new year” to each other. for breakfast, people often eat dumplings and baozi. after breakfast, people often make many delicious foods, and children often play cards, computer games and fireworks. on the second and third day, we visit friends and relatives.

everyone is busy on chinese new year, and everyone is happy, too.

春節(jié)是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。我們也稱它為春節(jié)。它是在農(nóng)歷1月1日。

在新年前夕,所有人圍坐在桌子上,有一個(gè)大的家庭晚餐。有一些蔬菜,一些魚,一些肉,一些水果和一些喝果汁、可口可樂、百事可樂和一些不錯(cuò)的葡萄酒?？偟膩碚f,這是一個(gè)很好的和美味的晚餐。晚飯后,我們總是看電視節(jié)目。我們有一個(gè)美好的晚上在新年前夕。

篇7

Fresh people were jubilant. Shopping came in an endless stream, some are buying New Year pictures, some are buying necessities and some sit around the stove fire box to watch TV, there are people playing mahjong playing poker, and so on.

Anyway, the street colourful, all kinds of people, a full range of variety of goods, full of beautiful things in eyes, I'm afraid people want to buy what all difficult to choose!

Lights before the Spring Festival, every family, every family dressed house having a unique style, each have each personality. They put to buy necessities to all over the floor. Bought New Year paintings how stick method, then each have their own style and preferences. Some dish, some backwards, and the crooked stick, each has his strong point. People buy vegetables all fixed, such as the Spring Festival comes, only can be a festival. Families with firecrackers, people wear new clothes, preparing New Year, before the Spring Festival, people go out, if met good friends, always mouth don't forget to say: "the streets!"

People kill pig to kill sheep, busily preparing for the Spring Festival belly-worship.

The Spring Festival, the children will get up early, to mom and dad's room, the traditional New Year ceremony. The children of parents said some lucky though, my parents brought out New Year's money, let the children happily. Everybody hope this year to luck, a thriving business.

Some friends and family together, taste the wine, talked some happy message. And the most happy is, we can take off to save money, and then happy running up the street to buy a lot of fun things, such as cars, buggies, toy guns, football, etc., and as long as our mouth sweet a bit, say more blessed penis, that can make a lot of money!

People have been playing late into the night, his mouth eating delicious fruit, setting off firecrackers fireworks in his hand... Adult children singing and dancing, potter to play with!

盼啊!盼啊，眼看春節(jié)就快到了，想到這，我不由得笑了起來，在春節(jié)前，

人們個(gè)個(gè)喜氣洋洋，個(gè)個(gè)精神飽滿。逛街的人絡(luò)繹不絕，有的在買年畫，有的在買年貨，有的坐著火箱圍著火爐看電視，還有的人在打麻將打撲克，等等不一而足。

反正街上五彩繽紛，各種各樣的人都有，各種各樣的貨物都齊全，琳瑯滿目，人們恐怕想買什么都難選擇!

春節(jié)前，家家戶戶都燈火通明，家家都把房子打扮得別具一格，各有各的個(gè)性。他們把買來的年貨放得滿地都地。買來的年畫怎么貼法，那就各有自己的風(fēng)格和喜好了。有的正著貼，有的倒著貼，還有的歪著貼，各有千秋。人們把買來的菜全部都弄好了，只等春節(jié)一到，就可一飽口福了。家家備有鞭炮，人們穿上新衣服，準(zhǔn)備迎新年，在春節(jié)前，人們一出門，如果遇上了好朋友，總是口中不忘說一句：“上街啊!”

人們殺豬宰羊，忙碌地準(zhǔn)備著春節(jié)大吃大喝一番。

春節(jié)到了，小朋友們便早早起床，來到爸爸媽媽的房間，開始了傳統(tǒng)的拜年儀式了。小朋友們對(duì)父母說著一些吉祥話兒，爸媽就拿出壓歲錢，讓小孩子們高高興興。大家都希望今年能夠吉祥如意，招財(cái)進(jìn)寶。

篇8

Friendship this lock, lock me with another person together, care about each other, help each other.

Friendship, it is like the red sun, lighting up our growth path; It is like sweet dew, thirst for us; It is like the flash, the brightest star, every night, always silently bless us in heaven.

Friendship, high-sounding name! It with our growth, accompanies us to play... Friendship is priceless, how much money can not buy back.

Who cannot leave the friendship, cherish!

友誼，是把鎖，把兩個(gè)人緊緊鎖在一起;友誼，是顆糖，讓兩個(gè)人嘗到快樂的滋味：友誼，是無價(jià)的，每個(gè)人都需要它。

友誼這把鎖，把我和另外一個(gè)人鎖在一起，彼此關(guān)心，彼此幫助。

友誼，它像火紅的太陽，照亮了我們成長的路線;它像甘甜的露水，為我們解渴;它又像最閃最亮的星星，每到黑夜，總在天上默默祝福著我們。

篇9

我的奶奶已經(jīng)63歲了，但還很好學(xué)，并且很認(rèn)真。

一天，奶奶讓我教她英語，我說：“好吧”。

開始了，第一步，我教奶奶讀26個(gè)字母，我要求讀10遍，奶奶按照我說的完成了。第二步，我教奶奶讀音標(biāo)，奶奶就一個(gè)一個(gè)，反反復(fù)復(fù)的讀直到讀會(huì)。第三步，我把我書上的單詞都寫到紙上，并且還標(biāo)上了音標(biāo)，有的還畫上了圖，要求奶奶一個(gè)讀5遍，奶奶不一會(huì)都讀完了，奶奶說:“還有沒有了”，我說：“今天的學(xué)完了，明天再學(xué)，但奶奶還是繼續(xù)讀，讀到會(huì)為止，要是換成我，早就不學(xué)了，奶奶的毅力很大，我要學(xué)習(xí)。

第二天，我和奶奶去買菜，奶奶看見白菜，就拿出白菜的單詞讀，看見狗，就拿出狗的單詞讀......

1個(gè)月后，奶奶的英語學(xué)得比我都好，我心想，我一定要超多奶奶。

篇10

我的愛好英語作文一：

I am Bob. I am 11 years old. I live in a tall building. It has twenty-nine floors. I live on the twenty-first floor. I am from China. I have small eyes. My favourite food is chicken. My favourite animal is dog，because it is lovely.

My best friend is Ted. We often play together. But his house is very far from my house. He likes playing computer games. My hobby is playing football. I often play football with my classmates, because they like playing football, too. We often win. Why do I like football? Because it does a lot of good for my body. Do you like football?

我的愛好英語作文二：

My hobby is lisetening to music.

I like listening to music best.Because listening to music makes me relaxed.When I am tired,I will listening some quiet music,that makes me fall asleep very quickly.My favorite music is the music that has good lyrics.Good lyrics can also make me learn Chinese or English well

I love listening to music.I will keep this hobby forever.

我的愛好英語作文三：